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Yay!
I'm an inspirer!

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I definitely enjoyed this one. My only idea for a change is maybe if you made it three stanzas, like so.

Beach strolling, bound -
for far-off favoritisms, like piers and -
ice cream cones, never -
sand beneath your feet, nor -
the beaten path of upcropped waves, passed -
by with all disengage, when really -
smarmy seafishers, all hooks and tackles, laugh at -
your simplest insecurities,

claiming they -
appreciate each footfall. Stop -
to listen to each middle man. Stop -
to follow birdcalls. Stop -
and tenderly reel each fish.

While you -
only rudely rush with comma clipped half sentences, squished -
between YOUR toes.

but looking at it again, maybe not. Just totally an idea. feel free to leave it.
anyways. I like this one. Good work, its a very fun read, albeit a bit confusing at first.
Definitely worth sorting out.

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Thank you. I don't think I enjoy your suggestion enough to change anything... but I might look into breaking it up. My big miff is probably whether to make 'squished between YOUR toes' one seperate line or leave it how it is. I've been debating all day... hm.
Thanks for the fave!

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very beautiful, inspiring and endearing imagery
this poem is very beautiful and full of life

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fun to read - beautifully composed.

really, really nice job!

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